Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Invisible Cities Online Greenlight Review

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kimberley,

    Well done on getting your first bOGR up and running.

    You have a lovely selection of thumbnails, and, I think That Diomira is a good choice for you.

    Your mission statement is evocative and captures the essence of "your" Diomira. It certainly feels harmonious, dare I say, Utopian.

    Check out the Vessel in New york

    https://www.hudsonyardsnewyork.com/discover/vessel

    And the glass Cloche at the Bombay Sapphire distillery, both were designed by Heatherwick Studios

    http://www.heatherwick.com/projects/buildings/

    I see some elements of Blobitecture / blobism creeping into your influence map, it is a bit more modern than some of the other images in your map but should give you an idea of matereiality, especially how curved metals and glass interact with their environments.

    Colours and light are going to be very important to sell the atmosphere on this one.

    Next stop more research on those elements so you can start to formalise your structures.

    In terms of thumbnails, 4 and 8 work well as establishing shots, they have interesting compositions with 8 being slightly stronger in terms of immersing the viewer and stil showing us the city.

    Thumbnail 1 is a great start in trying to work out what the buildings will eventually look like.

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  2. Hi Simon,

    Thank you for your advise. I will take all these notes on board and do some more research, then start the next sketching processes.

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